Business Writing Speaks Truth, Albeit Unintentionally

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While sorting through my notes, I came upon the following, which was published by some self-important systems architects at a major financial institution. They were later all “made redundant”, poor sots. But perhaps their habit of writing without ever saying anything (see previous post) didn’t help their company succeed.

The Detail Recommendation List is a collection of recommendations that have been made earlier and are shattered throughout this document.

Yes, this got published externally. Frankly, more of their recommendations needed shattering.

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